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说说为什么 哪里错了
I am writing this letter to ask you thatyou will enter university.What I want to advice you of subject to specializein history or computer science.Because They are very interest and full of knowledge.you can study good kill that it help looking for work .I hope that you havegood develop and highly achieve.
第一行:that---if 这里是表是否的宾语从句,不能用that 连.what I want to ...这句整体不通.如果想表达我想建议你.,用I want to advice you to choose the subject of .就可以.
第二行,interest---interesting前者是名词或动词,后者才是形容词.
第三行,good kill---是good skills吧?that 后面的it去掉.这里是定语从句,不要再加主语了.work 改为jobs,job 有职位的意思,work 有工作量的意思.develop---development前者动词,后者名词.achieve---achiement原因同前.