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麻烦一下短文改错Thank you for your letter.My school is organized a b

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麻烦一下短文改错
Thank you for your letter.My school is organized a basketball team and there's just a chance which I can join it.I'm litter of course ,but terribly quick and bravely .While the other are jumping about in the air ,I can run under my leg and get the ball .It will be lots of fun for practicing out in the playground in the afternoon with the thee around us all red and yellow and everybody laughing and shouting.There are the happier girls I 've ever seen ang I 'm the happiest in all!I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things I am doing at school ,but the bell was ringing ,so i just have to stop here.
(1) My school is organized ,这里最好不要用被动,应该是organizing,表主动,表正在进行``````(2)there's just a chance which I,我觉得这里有问题,应该用that 而不是which, 按意思讲,应该是同位语,而不是定语从句``...