作业帮帮我看看错误的地方,请指教,英语方面的~
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帮我看看错误的地方,请指教,英语方面的~
多提意见!我到底差成什么样子啊~努力方向?
Hi everyone
My name is yixian ,you can call me sara,I ‘ll say “yeah” incommon
I was born in 1986 at a town .when I born ,all people deem I will change very fat than I grown up.but in fact when I 20 year olde ,I always can’t pass 100 pound.when I was a kid ,I have stardy drawing .Drawing is so vacuity for me ,but I real like singsing song ,musice make me happy and forget all the trubble .I love mu familiy wery much .my family is my power ,no matter what happened I alway become strong ,because my parents is most important in my life,I told myself londly I never give up
多提意见!我到底差成什么样子啊~努力方向?
Hi everyone
My name is yixian ,you can call me sara,I ‘ll say “yeah” incommon
I was born in 1986 at a town .when I born ,all people deem I will change very fat than I grown up.but in fact when I 20 year olde ,I always can’t pass 100 pound.when I was a kid ,I have stardy drawing .Drawing is so vacuity for me ,but I real like singsing song ,musice make me happy and forget all the trubble .I love mu familiy wery much .my family is my power ,no matter what happened I alway become strong ,because my parents is most important in my life,I told myself londly I never give up
文章修改过了喔.OMG.. 错的还真多.
有些不懂呢..
Hi everyone
My name is yixian ,you can call me sara,I ‘ll say “yeah” in common [
有些不懂呢..
Hi everyone
My name is yixian ,you can call me sara,I ‘ll say “yeah” in common [