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They soon became popular with which their beautiful voice.这句

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They soon became popular with which their beautiful voice.这句话有语病么,如果有的话请帮我改下,写作文急用
很显然which是多余的,which一般用在定语从句中,引导定语从句,但这句话没有先行词,也不是定语从句,就不需要which.
正确的句子应该是:
They soon became popular with their beautiful voice.
他们不久就凭借自己优美的嗓音而受到欢迎.
再问: 那改成the voice with which they soon became popular呢,是不是要加逗号呢
再答: 你如果这么改的话和原来的意思就不一样了,原来的句子the voice 作介词宾语,你要这么改,只有主语,没有谓语了,他们因之而出名的嗓音,后面就没有内容了,怎么样啊?你看看这样可以吗?The voice with which they soon became popular is very beautiful. 他们借之而出名的嗓音非常好听。