作业帮急求一道英语改错题 , 谢谢
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急求一道英语改错题 , 谢谢
I like watching birds I choose this bobby yesrs ago because I like
birds and enjoy being close to the nature ,Bird watching is a good
hobby so it is not very expensive.As a beginner ,all you need is curiosity
and a notebook ,when you become curious about it , you may want
to bbuy more books aboutbirds and a better telescope ,not special
skills are needed,but it helps if i join a bird watching club.they can
teach you when and where to watch birds and what to watch them
you will also be taught about geography and the weather ,if you
want to become a bird watcher , I strong suggest you try to find
a bird watching club, and they will help you get start ,good luck
I like watching birds I choose this bobby yesrs ago because I like
birds and enjoy being close to the nature ,Bird watching is a good
hobby so it is not very expensive.As a beginner ,all you need is curiosity
and a notebook ,when you become curious about it , you may want
to bbuy more books aboutbirds and a better telescope ,not special
skills are needed,but it helps if i join a bird watching club.they can
teach you when and where to watch birds and what to watch them
you will also be taught about geography and the weather ,if you
want to become a bird watcher , I strong suggest you try to find
a bird watching club, and they will help you get start ,good luck
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删去括弧内字
I like watching birds.I chose (choose) this hobby (bobby) years (yesrs)
ago because I like birds and enjoy being close to the nature.
改后的时态控制也不好,但还是可以接受
Bird watching is a good hobby and (so) it is not very expensive.
这里没有用so并不适当
As a beginner ,all you need is curiosity and a notebook .(,)
When (when) you become curious about it ,you may want
to buy (bbuy) more books about birds and a better telescope,with no need
of special skills (not special skills are needed).
And (but) it helps if you (i) join a bird watching club(.) You (they) can
learn (teach) from it when and where to watch birds and what to watch about
(watch) them.
(1) 原文不要一时用 I ,之后又用you
(2) they这个代名词来指club不太好
所以用了you can learn from it
it 指club
You (you) will also be taught about geography and the weather.
If (if) you want to become a bird watcher ,I strongly (strong) suggest you try to
find a bird watching club,and it (they) will help you get started (start).
Good (good) luck.
一点意见
减少标点符号的错误
原文的错处便会少了许多
删去括弧内字
I like watching birds.I chose (choose) this hobby (bobby) years (yesrs)
ago because I like birds and enjoy being close to the nature.
改后的时态控制也不好,但还是可以接受
Bird watching is a good hobby and (so) it is not very expensive.
这里没有用so并不适当
As a beginner ,all you need is curiosity and a notebook .(,)
When (when) you become curious about it ,you may want
to buy (bbuy) more books about birds and a better telescope,with no need
of special skills (not special skills are needed).
And (but) it helps if you (i) join a bird watching club(.) You (they) can
learn (teach) from it when and where to watch birds and what to watch about
(watch) them.
(1) 原文不要一时用 I ,之后又用you
(2) they这个代名词来指club不太好
所以用了you can learn from it
it 指club
You (you) will also be taught about geography and the weather.
If (if) you want to become a bird watcher ,I strongly (strong) suggest you try to
find a bird watching club,and it (they) will help you get started (start).
Good (good) luck.
一点意见
减少标点符号的错误
原文的错处便会少了许多