高一作文打分第一篇We middle school student have had many tests or exa

高一作文打分
第一篇
We middle school student have had many tests or exams,AS a result,the majority of us might succeed or fail in them However,the attitudes towards failure are varying from person to person.With sorting them out,I put them into two different classifications.the people who face the failure with positive mood will encourage themselves,and gain confidence once again so that they could correct their mistakes in no time which have been made.On the contrary,with negative attitude,they will abandon themselves and lose their confidence.At last,They will never spare no efforts to struggle,In my opinion,we should maintain the first kind,only in this way can we succeed at last!
第二篇
We middle school students have had many tests and exams.We have both achieved success and suffered from failure.Different students hold different attitudes to failure.
Some fall in low spirits when they don't do well in the exams.They lose heart and no longer study hard as before.
But most students take an active attitude towards failure .They find out the causes so that they will not make the similar mistakes I agree with those with active attitudes .
As we know ,Failure is the mother of the success.even great men have fail many times before the succeed So we must deal with our mistakes correctly.
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我是大学英语写作老师,我认为：A=20-23 B=23-26.
理由如下：B-段落清晰,论证清楚,随有语法和文法错误,但不影响阅读.