I am a high school student,the college entrance examination

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I am a high school student,the college entrance examination is coming,I kept give myself the excuse to relax.But no one would be disappointed.No one would even know.Though I am a boy looks very nice,but I can stop,because I have a great dream,"if you have a dream,you must depend it"!in my opinion,dream is not necessary lonely on the way,in fact,I need most is to support voice,every day is can feel happy.I really hope I can have a good man accompany me to struggle for the dream.

高中生能写出这样的短文已是很不错的了.加油!
有几个地方需要改进：
I am a high school student,the college entrance examination is coming,I kept [give -> giving] myself [the -> an] excuse to relax.But no one would be disappointed.No one would even know.Though I am a boy [加上 who] looks very nice,[删去 but] I can stop,because I have a great [dream -> dreamer],"if you have a dream,you must depend it"!in my opinion,[dream -> dreaming] is not necessary lonely [on the -> in a] way,in fact,[加上 what] I need most is to support [my?] voice,every day [is -> I] can feel happy.I really hope I can have a good man [加上 to] accompany me to struggle for the dream.
再问：谢谢你！你是一个好人
再问：本来好评是给你的，但是不小心按错了，好评给了其他人
再问：没有按错。嘿嘿，你的英语一定很好吧？
再答：你能进步就好。为你鼓掌！
我生活在英语环境里，多年从事教学。很高兴能给你帮助。

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