作业帮一道英语改错题,一共有十个错误.
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一道英语改错题,一共有十个错误.
During the national day holiday,I went to xi’an,where is really a very beautiful city.on October lst,my parents and I got there by the air.Actually,I was very excicing,because it was my first visit in xi’an.My uncle came to meet us at the airport.How happily was when I saw him,as I haven’t met his for many years.
On October 2nd ,they went to the bell tower,luckily,I struck the old bell or enjoyed a good performance.Then we enjoyed a wonderful dinner.
On October 3rd,we paid visit to the zoo where I made friends with monkeys.
In short,I feel very happy while visiting Xi’an city.
一共有十个错误.
During the national day holiday,I went to xi’an,where is really a very beautiful city.on October lst,my parents and I got there by the air.Actually,I was very excicing,because it was my first visit in xi’an.My uncle came to meet us at the airport.How happily was when I saw him,as I haven’t met his for many years.
On October 2nd ,they went to the bell tower,luckily,I struck the old bell or enjoyed a good performance.Then we enjoyed a wonderful dinner.
On October 3rd,we paid visit to the zoo where I made friends with monkeys.
In short,I feel very happy while visiting Xi’an city.
一共有十个错误.
where->which
by air,去掉the
exciting->excited
happily->happy
haven't->hadn't
his->him
they->we
or->and
a visit,visit前加a
feel->felt
by air,去掉the
exciting->excited
happily->happy
haven't->hadn't
his->him
they->we
or->and
a visit,visit前加a
feel->felt