高手帮忙看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误...谢谢...谢谢.万分感谢.

高手帮忙看一下这篇文章有没有语法错误...谢谢...谢谢.万分感谢.
What is friendship? It is to relate with somebody without need for money or objective. It is to need emotion and over wealth is friendship , no matter what their background , age , sex or personality.
Friendship can be pure. We hear , nowdays, however, how one can be cheated by friends. Many people get along with someone because they have a lot of money. It is doultful that is real friendship.
Having friends, one can be find happiness. If you are in trouble your friends will help you through or at least comfort you. When you are happy , they share it with you. They are also there for you to chat with at any time.
It is a wonderful feeling, as the proverb says" to love each other is easy but to make frieds is hard", So, it is crucial that we should get along with our friends. In my opinon ,it is a shame to deceive your friends . The world would be more beautiful if it was full of filled with friendship

括号里是原文,下面是做了改动的句子：
（ It is to relate with somebody without need for money or objective. . ）
Friendship is a form of people's relationship generally considered to be close, warm and without consideration of money and materials.
(It is to need emotion and over wealth is friendship,)
Friendship associated with people's emotional need rather than material benefits.
(Friendship can be pure.)
Friendship should be pure.
(We hear, nowadays, however, how one can be cheated by friends.)
These days we hear that there is a lot of people are cheated by friends.
(Many people get along with someone because they have a lot of money.)
Many people appear to be friendly towards someone who is rich.
(It is doubtful that is real friendship. )
Such friendship is doubtful.
(Having friends, one can be find happiness.)
Happiness can be found in friendship. /Someone can found happiness by having friends.
(When you are happy, they share it with you.)
When you are happy, they share the joy with you./When you are happy, they are happy, too.
(They are also there for you to chat with at any time. )
They are also there to chat with you at any time.
(It is a wonderful feeling, as the proverb says" to love each other is easy but to make friends is hard")
Friendship gives wonderful feelings. There is a proverb, which says, “It is easy to love each other. But is hard to make friends.
(So, it is crucial that we should get along with our friends.)
So, it is important that we get along with our friends.
(In my opinion, it is a shame to deceive your friends. The world would be more beautiful if it was full of filled with friendship)
It is shameful to deceive friends. The world would be a more beautiful place if it filled with friends.