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题目:三年来，你的父母、老师及朋友一定曾经给予过你很多的帮助，你也一定有很多关于他（她）难忘的经历。请你以“感谢我的 ”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿，表达你的感激之情。（请老师判文章，该文章并按中考要求给出得分) Thanks to my best friend Everyone has his best friend , so do I . And I will never forget the day I spent with my best friend. I’m a student who did homework carefully , but I always had bad grades. Day by day, my record were worse and worse, especially in English. while I was worrying about my study, my best friend Fiona spent so much time helping me with my English grammar . Although she was as busy as me, she always found time talking with me in English. What’s more, she told me not to give up easily when difficult work lies before you. In my heart , this is really a meaningful and useful experience for me. Fiona makes me understand not only if we want to be successful , we should hold on to it, but also a friend in need is a friend indeed.(谢谢)
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Thanks to my best friend Everyone has his best friend , so do I . And I will never forget the day I spent with my best friend. I’m a student who did homework carefully , but I always had bad grades. Day by day, my record were worse and worse, especially in English. while I was worrying about my study, my best friend Fiona spent so much time helping me with my English grammar . Although she was as busy as me, she always found time talking with me in English. What’s more, she told me not to give up easily when difficult work lies before you. In my heart , this is really a meaningful and useful experience for me. Fiona makes me understand not only if we want to be successful , we should hold on to it, but also a friend in need is a friend indeed.(谢谢)
你的文章近乎完美！只需要在最后一句修改下：这个句子的连接不够好，意思有些乱。建议不采用not only……but also，直接用and就够了。 Fiona makes me understand that if we want to be successful , we should hold on to it and that a friend in need is a friend indeed.(谢谢)
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是花落无言老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略
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Thanks to my best friend Everyone has his best friend , so do I . And I will never forget the day I spent with my best friend. I’m a student who did homework carefully , but I always had bad grades. Day by day, my record were worse and worse, especially in English. while I was worrying about my study, my best friend Fiona spent so much time helping me with my English grammar . Although she was as busy as me, she always found time talking with me in English. What’s more, she told me not to give up easily when difficult work lies before you. In my heart , this is really a meaningful and useful experience for me. Fiona makes me understand not only if we want to be successful , we should hold on to it, but also a friend in need is a friend indeed.(谢谢)
你的文章近乎完美！只需要在最后一句修改下：这个句子的连接不够好，意思有些乱。建议不采用not only……but also，直接用and就够了。 Fiona makes me understand that if we want to be successful , we should hold on to it and that a friend in need is a friend indeed.(谢谢)
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是花落无言老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略