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英语短文改错 急!My English teacher had encouraged me to take part i

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英语短文改错 急!
My English teacher had encouraged me to take part in an English speech contest the other day.As a shy girl, I never thought of doing such kind things in public.Anyway,I final stood before the micriphone in face of the great number of students.To be frank,I had practiced a great deal times before stepping onto the stage.However,tomy much embarrassment,I forget all what Ihad prepared.I almost burst out crying for the moment,but soon Imanaged to calm me down.Believeit or not,the speech ultimately end with a great success.
I like eating fruit and vegetables which is of great benefit to our healthy.Not onlydo they prevent us from falling into ill,but they help us lose weight.I used to hate vegetables,and followng the doctor's advice.I gradually kicked the bad habit.Just as an old saying going."An apple a day keeps the doctor away".However,there are still many chlidren disliked fruit and vegetables .Oncontrary,infiuenced by this or that kind od davertisement,many were crazy about junk food.Consequentiy,they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong.In my opinion,we must take action to changing it.
第二行kind后面加个of,final改成finally
第三行deal后面加of
第四行forget换成forgot,what去掉
第五行out改成into,soon后面那个是什么看不懂,改一下
第六行ultimately改成eventually,end with改成turned out to be
第一行is改成are,healthy改成health
第二行ill改成illness,and改成but
第三行kicked可以改成kick away,going改成says
第四行disliked改成disliking
第五行On contrary改成Even worse,were改成are
第六行Consequentiy改成Consequently
第七行changing改成change
加油学英语吧,路还很长