英语演讲稿,感觉有些地方不顺,想改的活泼一点.

英语演讲稿,感觉有些地方不顺,想改的活泼一点.
Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.
I’m very glad to stand here and give you ashort speech!To begin with ,I want to ask a question .Does everybody dream agood dream last night?Actually ,Today I want to talk about dream with you.Ofcourse,What I want to talk is not a dream you have last night,but a dreamabout life.
Every one has dreams about life,differentdreams at different life stage,and we need dreams to support us.Dreams arelike the stars we never reach in the sky,but like most mariners,we can chartour course by them.With the dream,we have a direction,with a direction,wewere no longer confused.With the dream,there is hope,With hope,we have thestrength to fight.
Life is tough,and there are always ups anddowns,maybe we fail in the way to our aims,and we may feel depressed ,wheneverat this time,the dream in our heart can always confort us,encourage us ,andsupport us to move ahead .
So bear in mind your dream and never giveup your dream easily.look into the great people’s experiences,you may findthe truth that good dream makes a good one,because there is nothing like adream to create the future and build up our body .
Finally,I would suggest.Have a dream in mind and keep pursuing on it.Try to use yourtime sensibly,do what you should do to make your dream come ture.Although itis a hard job to get to the top of your dreaming mountain,but as the sayingsays,God helps those who help themselves.” As long as we keep,we will finallyfullfill it .

Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.
I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech!To begin with ,I want to ask one question .My friends,did you have a good dream last night?Actually ,Today my topic is "dream ".Of course,What I want to talk is not the dream you dreamt last night,it is the dream about your life.
Everybody has dreams about life,we have differnet dreams in different times,and they support us .Some dreams are like stars,we never reach them ,but like mariners ,we chart our courseby them With the dream,we have a direction,with a direction,we won't be confused and lost in the reality.With the dream,there is hope,With hope,we have the strength to fight with the enemies in our heart.
Life is tough,and there are always ups and downs,perhaps we could fail in the process to success,and we would feel depressed ,however,the dream in our heart can always remind us,encourage and support us to go ahead .We never say give up!
So bear dream in your mind and never give it up easily.Look and think about the great people’s experience,you may find] that great dream makes a great person,because there is nothing like dream to create the future and build up our life .
Finally,I would sugges yout.Keep a dream in your mind and keep chasing it.Try to make full use of your time ,do what you should do to make your dream come ture.Although it is a hard job to arrive at top of the mountainr,but as the sayingsays,God helps those who help themselves.As long as we keep,we will finally gain success.
That's all,thank you !
再问： 请问能否告诉我，您改在哪、？
再答： 我改的很多，你自己看一下。我觉得你的语法中有很多生硬，有毛病的地方。我也要学习呢，所以不好意思不能帮你一一指出来
再问： 呵呵，网上搜的。。。