英语达人帮忙改点东西my name is .and you can just call me ,because my C

英语达人帮忙改点东西
my name is .and you can just call me ,because my Chinese nickname is and these two words are same word in Chinese.so i choose it to be my english name.
I was born in XXXX in .I know lots of people never heard about this city.is the 5th big city in China and at northeast of China.also is a fantastic city and very important in this world.
When I was 7 years old,I began study at school,and I really like to studied Math and Science.Then I studied at No.XXX middle school of .That is a really good middle school in .During that time,I really like Math,Physical and Chinese.At that time I began to define my goal in my life.That is I want to have my own business in future.And I knew the .business is summit of the world,even Global Economic Crisis.So when I graduate from middle school,I came to .Now I study program at .But my goal is to open my own business,so I choose accounting at .
As we all know,is a really famous college in and very good at business.I will go all our to study at ,during 2 years.I believe I will have enough ability to transfer to ,and others which in education system.I believe I can do it at .will help me to get that goal.
Thanks your time to read my writing.I really hope you can admit me.Thank you so much.
Sincerely,

I know that lots of people...
5th biggest city in northeast of China...(后面就不需要了）
when i was 7,i started my primary school,i really enjoyed studying math and science.
No.xxx was my middle school,which is still the best school in my city.
【我只改了前面,楼主英语需要加强啊!】