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假如你是李华,写信告诉你远在美国的朋友Jane关于你家乡的巨大变化

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假如你是李华,写信告诉你远在美国的朋友Jane关于你家乡的巨大变化
1你的家乡以前很穷,环境被污染,但是现在你的家乡已经不是原来的样子,发生了巨大变化.
2工厂已经不在了,人们在山上种了许多树.
3人们不再得奇怪的疾病,过着健康幸福的生活.
4最重要的是,人们意识到环境保护的重要性
dear jane
how is going about you? Many years ago you came to my hometown found that it is very poor and the environment is very bad,garbage was everywhere.but now I will happy to tell you that my hometown is not derty any more,it have a big change.
first,the factory made the air pollut is dispeer,people grow many trees an the mountain,now it is very beautiful. second,penople did not get the strang ill any more,and they lived happely.the more important is people's aware of protect the environment is strengthen,they will more love our hometown than befor.
Wherecome you to comeback to visit my hometown,you will amarze the change of it. I wlii waiting for your coming.
Yours LliHua
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