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please check the grammar of this sentence

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please check the grammar of this sentence
Q:why are you interested in becoming a HealthEast volunteer?
A:I want to help others.And Being a good listener and taking care of them is what patients need.
语法很好!只有一个小小错误:
Q:Why are you interested in becoming a HealthEast volunteer?
A:I want to help others.Being a good listener and taking care of them is what patients need.
但是答案的意思有问题吧?为什么
“Being a good listener and taking care of them is what patients need.”
是你要做个 HealthEast volunteer 的理由呢?
建议你这样改:
“I enjoy taking care of people.Besides it helps me be a good listener."
再问: Besides it helps me be a good listener? 还是 Besides it helps me to become a good listener or Besides it helps me being a good listener? I think all of them are correct. Maybe u can help me to check this sentence too. Q: Please list any previous volunteer experiences. A:I have made PowerPoint for the church; I have stayed in the nursery taking/take care of children please explain why.
再答: Besides it helps me be a good listener. Besides it helps me become a good listener. 两者皆可。 第二个问题 建议这样改: A: I have made PowerPoint presentations at the church. I also have experience taking care of children in the nursery. 含义和你的句子一样,不过语法上比较完整/正确。