作业帮这句话有错误吗?如何改进?
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这句话有错误吗?如何改进?
hi,nice to meet u,guys.everyday i have plenty of questions to ask in baidu,and i need an enlish professional whom i could turn to for help.so,well,if u r my hi-friend and bound up in answering my issues accurately,i could give u points of every question.
hi,nice to meet u,guys.everyday i have plenty of questions to ask in baidu,and i need an enlish professional whom i could turn to for help.so,well,if u r my hi-friend and bound up in answering my issues accurately,i could give u points of every question.
turn to sb for help结构,因此whom用的是正确的,不要听1L的.
well 在这里是口语化的表达 没有问题 不要听1L的
bound up用在这里的确不是很合适 将这一句话改成“...and would like to answer.”或者“and(you are)willing to answer”
仅此一处不是很恰当 写得不错 I AM YOU HI-FRIEND,So.
well 在这里是口语化的表达 没有问题 不要听1L的
bound up用在这里的确不是很合适 将这一句话改成“...and would like to answer.”或者“and(you are)willing to answer”
仅此一处不是很恰当 写得不错 I AM YOU HI-FRIEND,So.