假如你是李华,你的美国网友来信向你询问目前出现的雾霾天气.请你给他回信.英语作文!主要内容:雾霾天气的现状及给人们的身体

假如你是李华,你的美国网友来信向你询问目前出现的雾霾天气.请你给他回信.英语作文!主要内容:雾霾天气的现状及给人们的身体生活带来的危害.抵制空气污染的措施.谈谈你的感想.

Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. I’m also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people’s health such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.
As everybody knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.
Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas.
【解析】
试题分析：本文的写作非常好些,对于环境保护的文章学生在平时的练习中经常练,学生有话可写.对于本文首先对他的关注表示感谢Thank you for your concern.进而介绍雾霾天气对人健康的不好的影响,如交通堵塞,肺癌,交通事故等等such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on.来表达.最后,表达自己的观点和感想,我们应该尽力的少开车,选择环保的产品,每个人都要意识到保护环境的重要性try to drive less and choose air-friendly products.
everyone should have the environmental awareness.
考点：提纲类写作
点评：书面表达是最能体现一个学生的语言运用能力和英语思维理解的题目,议论文的写作一般采用经典的二段或三段式进行行文,议论文是比较容易写的文体,提高作文无外乎平时多练习,在练习过程中,对于写错或是不知道表达的一定要多问老师,同时还应该多进行阅读,对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累,并且学以致用,勤积累,多背诵,这样才能作文才能稳步的提升.
翻译：亲爱的戴维,
我很高兴收到你的信.我从你的信,你关心的是在中国的一些地区经常出现的烟雾学会.谢谢你的关心.我也很担心这样可怕的天气,它带来了很多不便而对人们的健康危害等交通拥挤,道路交通事故,严重的咳嗽,喉咙痛和肺癌等.
大家都知道,一个好的环境是很好的保护.所以我们应该尽我们所能有所作为.尽量少开车,选择空气环保产品.只有当每个人都有环保意识,才能有更清洁的空气.
希望尽快听到你的分享你的好的想法.
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