英语短文改错.下面短文有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.

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英语短文改错.下面短文有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.
Dear Chairman,
I'm a student from Class 1,Grade 3.I want to join in your club.At school,I study very hardly.I'm always ready to help others.I got along with my classmates but I like to help them with their lessons.I often help the old across the road .On the buses,I often give my seat to others.On weekends ,I usually go to the park pick up rubbish.I want to join a club very much.For one reason,I like to make friend and work with others.For other,I will have more chances to help others.I would be glad if accepting.
Yours,
Li Ping

I'm a student in Class 1,Grade 3.I want to join your club.At school,I study very hard.I'm always ready to help others.I get along with my classmates and I like to help them with their lessons.I often help the old across the road .In the buses,I often give my seats to others.On weekends ,I usually go to the park to pick up rubbish.I want to join a club very much.For one reason,I like to make friends and work with others.For other,I will have more chances to help others .I would be glad if accepted.
我个人觉得应该是这么改的,我也是学生,无意间看到了你提的问题.