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求修改作文,英语创新大赛的
Recently,Amy Chua,or the “Tiger Mother”,aroused heated discussions both in US and in China with her book,Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother.The following are the ten things she lists in her book that she strictly forbids her two daughters to do:
a.Attend a sleepover (a party for children in which they stay the night at someone’s house);
b.Have a play date (in which children hang out with their friends);
c.Be in a school play;
d.Complain about not being in a school play;
e.Watch TV or play computer games;
f.Choose their own extracurricular activities;
g.Get any grade less than an A;
h.Not be the No.1 student in every subject except gym and drama;
i.Play any instrument other than the piano or violin;
j.Not play the piano or violin.
You are invited to write under either of the following two topics.The length of your writing should not exceed 300 words.
(1) Suppose you are a “tiger parent”.Write a letter to your child and explain to her/him your ideas about tiger parenting.
(2) Suppose you are a child who has tiger parents.Write a letter to your parents and explain to them your ideas about tiger parenting.
作文:
Thank You,My Tiger Mom
Dear Mom,
Recently,I have raed a book on ‘tiger parenting’,which had an important influence on me.In others’s opinion,you are a strict mother.You always order me to do what I don’t want to.However,I know it’s you that lead me a right way to know the real world.
Never do you allow me to take part in extracurricular activities.\x05I know exactly what kind of girl I am.If you didn’t do so,I might not be as I am now.You always set a high goal for me:you don’t allow me to get any grade less than A.Many people think it’s too difficult for me to achieve,but it suits me well.As is well-known to us,everyone has a dream,most of which may not come true.But they can at least go ahead and make some achievements.Yes,goals are truly higher than facts,but what can we finally do if we don’t have goals at all?
Besides,several people believe that as the best way to study is to develop the interest,you should give me more space to learn by myself.Nevertheless,interest isn’t always the best teacher.An excessively wide range of interests and extremely shallow rading get a person nowhere but a land of superficiality.In fact,you care me so much.When I feel tired of playing the violin and don’t want to continue,your warm sound ‘Don’t be discouraged,I know you can’ keeps me hanging on.Your ‘tinger parenting’ teaches me that if I try my best,I will succeed.
Thank you,my tiger mom.Thank you for always educating me with your patience.Thank you for giving me so much confidence that I will never give up during the rest of my life.
Love,
Daughter
挺好的 直接交就行了