英语(不难)帮我修改作文,把错误句子改了就行,加括号的词一定要用．A Surprise DreamToday is gh

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帮我修改作文,把错误句子改了就行,加括号的词一定要用．
A Surprise Dream
Today is ghost festival!I'm very (upset).Long long ago ,an old man told me"Dog can give you good luck."So,I (walk the dog) on my way to school (in order to) kill ghost.But I (am concerned about ) myself,so I (have got to) hide the dog into my schoolbag.When I run into the class,my dog shout "oh,oh" (on purpose).(Entire) preson look at me.My teacher shout me"I (add your marks up).Are you want to know your marks?A 100-mark (survey),you only have 24.And you take your dog into school.So you can (pack your book up)and go out with your dog now.I (no longer) say what.
At dusk,I walk the dog on (highway).Sudden,my dog run away.I shout at my dog,but my dog (ignore) me.I run away follow my dog at once.But I fail.This is a strounge place.There is a old building.here and there are (dusty).There is a man in green (overcoat) at the left of (curtain).He say"I'm a ghost,I'm a (German) (Nazi).My name is Tom.Don't worry.I'm a kind man.Oh,I'm sorry,I'm a kind ghost."I speak to Tom"What's up?Can I leave?""Oh,wait a moment.Don't worry.I (settle) down here too long.I (suffer from) (loneliness) too long.But I can't leave here.So,I want a man to (gossip) with me (face to face)" I think of I can't say "I disagree",so I say"OK."He says"I (fall in love) a (Jewish) girl in (Netherlands) (Amsterdam),her name is (Kitty).But she (was tired of) Nazi.(Margot),a German girl,she love me,but I (dislike) Margot."I say"Why are you settle down here?"He says"You needn't know.Oh!It's time to leave,bye-bye."Sudden,a thunder hit me.Oh,my god!
Oh!Is it a surprise dream?I have a headache.Think of (a series of) surprise thing.I only can say to myself"It's a surprise dream."
在"kill ghost." 和 "But I (am concerned about ) myself"中间漏掉了一句"When I arrive at school,the guard stop me from taking my dog into school."
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A Surprising Dream
Today is Ghost Festival! And I'm very (upset). Long long ago, an old man told me, "Dog can bring you good luck." So I (walk the dog) to school (in order to) kill ghost. But I (am concerned about) myself, so I (have got to) hide the dog in my schoolbag. When I run into the class, my dog barks (on purpose). The (entire) class look at me. My teacher yells at me: "I (add your marks up). Do you want to know your marks? Out of a 100-mark (survey), you only get 24. And you take your dog to school. Now (pack your book up)and go out with your dog. You can (no longer) be here." Sadly, I leave school.

At dark, I walk the dog on (highway). Suddenly, my dog runs away. I shout at my dog, but it (ignores) me. I have to run after it. But I can't catch up. This is a strange place. There is an old (dusty) building. A man in green (overcoat) is standing at the left of (curtain). He says:"I'm a ghost, a (German) (Nazi). My name is Thomas. But don't worry. I'm a kind man. Oh, I'm sorry, I'm a kind ghost." I speak to Thomas:"What's up? Can I leave?""Oh,wait a moment. Please don't worry. I (settle) down here for too long. I (suffer from) (loneliness). But I can't leave here. So I want someone to (gossip) with (face to face)." I think I can't say no, so I agree. He says:"I (fell in love) with a (Jewish) girl in (Amsterdam), (Netherlands), her name was (Kitty). But she (was tired of) Nazi. A German girl named (Margot) loves me, but I (dislike) Margot."I ask:"Why do you settle down in here?"He answers:"You needn't know. Oh! It's time to leave, bye-bye."Suddenly, a thunder hit me. Oh, my god! Then I woke up

I have a headache. Thinking of (a series of) surprising things, I can only say to myself:"It's a surprising dream."
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