请高人帮满看一下这篇英语作文~这是我备考托福写的机经作文~

请高人帮满看一下这篇英语作文~这是我备考托福写的机经作文~
Do you agree or disagree ,the way a person dressed is a good indication of his/her personality or character.
Dressing style is an external appearance and is easily observed by others.Many people tend to figure out a person's internal character through what kind of clothes he or she wears.However,I cannot agree with this statement.The way a person dressed is not an indication of his or her personality or character ,at least is not a good one.
First,most people dress in a same or similar style ,making it hard to tell exactly what character they have on their own.When you go to a school ,a company,or a factory,people there all wear the same uniforms and there is no difference.Even when you walk on the street,people around you mostly wear common clothes similarly .Maybe they just think it is comfortable and usual to wear in such kind style and it usually do not indicate their character.Thus ,dressing styles cannot show what the peroson is like.
Furthurmore,even though some characters can be exploited by dressing styles sometimes,we are still not able to get a full picture of his or her personalities.A person wearing up-to-date clothes may be considered vogue and so he is.While if he is passionate ,what kind of clothes shold he wear to show he is really full of passion?The best answer is wearing nothing and it is an impossible.In this way ,it is not hard to conclude that when dressing styles is an indication of one's characters in some circumstances ,it is not a good one.
In general,by observing the ways a person dressed we are hard to get to know his character since most people's styles are not distinct and also many personalities will not be revealed by clothed.Maybe we can know a person well by having a long relationship with him or her,but not by analyzing his or her dressing styles.Thus I disagree with the statement.

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