求一片自己写的英语短文,四十分钟内回答的好的追加100分

求一片自己写的英语短文,四十分钟内回答的好的追加100分
根据漫画（一个孩子在雨中跳水,他妈妈在后面给他打伞）结合社会现象,以mother's love 为题,写一篇短文,发表你对母爱这一主题的看法

Mother’s love
The father loves and the maternal love is the world's most broad and selfless one.
They would rather pay everything they have to the children for the children’s good future.
We should not be questioned parents's love for us,furthermore we should with all we hve to return to the parents.But,to face the love they given,we should use rational view.
I have seen one comic,in the chart the son is practising diving in the rain,and the water is flowing down from his body.When his mothers saw this situation,regardless of their own body circumstance,and put her own umbrella resolutely over the son's head.
The picture is so warm,and it may let so many persons out of the family felt warm and home-sick.
But,seeing this pictures,we can not helpl questioning,this kind of love is too much for the children.Parents can't pulled all the children life under her own wings,they ultimately should became into a man to face all the troubled issues in the world,to face the life of the various problems,all kinds of test,and finally be adapt by the development of the society,and find a heaven and earth belong to themselves.
At the same time the children also need the understanding from their parents,understanding and support from the parents will make them more confident and more determined to complete their goals,parents' spoiling blindly will only makes their children stay in the same standing still,not only would not think about how to make contribution for the society,even their own survival would be influenced utmostly.
Love should be a broad enough,and should not be indulgence.Hope all the parents thinking clearly about whether they given is good for the developing for their children or not?if not helpful,but affect the development to their children,then the parents should consider whether it will be better to change another kind of love to support their children?
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