作业帮帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有什么语法错误,或者需要润色的地方.
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帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有什么语法错误,或者需要润色的地方.
The best gift I have ever received
I had a best gift ,that is a ticket of David Tao's solo vocal concert.On January 2 ,my mom gave me.Because she knows that I love David Tao very much and she wanted to encourage me to study hard.
I love this gift .Because this gift made my dream come true and made me see David Tao.I had a wonderful time that night.
In order to thank my mother gave me this gift.I should study harder and take good care of my mom.
This little ticket can become my best gift.Tt's all because I love my mom and I love David Tao.
What about you?
The best gift I have ever received
I had a best gift ,that is a ticket of David Tao's solo vocal concert.On January 2 ,my mom gave me.Because she knows that I love David Tao very much and she wanted to encourage me to study hard.
I love this gift .Because this gift made my dream come true and made me see David Tao.I had a wonderful time that night.
In order to thank my mother gave me this gift.I should study harder and take good care of my mom.
This little ticket can become my best gift.Tt's all because I love my mom and I love David Tao.
What about you?
第一句、that改为which非限定性定语从句.because she knows改为knew过去时.第二段开头、gave改为for giving.差不多就这些、还不错!呵呵