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英语改错题Dear classmates,I’ll tell you everything about my futur

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英语改错题
Dear classmates,
I’ll tell you everything about my future.Every one of US is thinking about the future.Do you know what that mine is?I have decided to become the middle school teacher.Does it sound surprising?I have this dream when I was only a child.I love children.
As we all can see,teachers are great needed in our country,especially in the country side.Many parents want his children to be well—educated,and they don’t want them to be teachers.Perhaps one of the main reason is that teachers work too hard but get too little.In spite that,I am determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown.
我就按照顺序写了,具体位置我就不标注出来了.
everything>>something,我告诉你一些关于一些关于我的未来的事,自然不是所有事.
that mine is>>去掉that,这里不存在从句,也不存在所有格不对应的情况
the middle>>a middle,我想成为一名老师,这个没有特指
i have this dream>>i had,时态错误很明显
his children>>their children,父母当然是他们的
and they>>but they,这里明显是转折,不应该是承接
main reason>>main reasons,one of 后面接复数,表示这些原因中的一个原因
In spite that>>In spite of that,In Spite 不能放在头,只能句中.
teach>>teaching,devote to doing sth,这里的to是介词而不是不定式,请记住.