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一篇英语作文,非常感谢你.

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一篇英语作文,非常感谢你.
My Valuable Present
Last Sunday,I had my birthday.I received a special present from my Dad.It was a dictionary.It was thick and colourful.I was amazed to see the thing and opened it on my own.On the first page,I saw a sentence:Where there is a will,there is a way.I decided to look up words in it and learned it with my heart.I do believe if I tried my best to learn English,I will succeed.So it's a valuable present in my mind.
My Valuable Present
Last Sunday,I had my birthday.I received a special present which was bought by(加上了定于从句) my Dad.Opening the present,I was amamzed(用了非谓,在句中很提分).(要注意语序,先打开,才知道里面是什么)It was a dictionary.And(注意衔接) it was not only thick but (用了not only...but also...句式)colourful.On the first page,I saw a sentence:Where there is a will,there is a way.I would(用decide不是非常恰当) look up the new words in it and learned them(注意代词的单复数形式) by(此处应该用介词by,另外不用加物主代词,表示“用心”)heart.I do believe if I try(不用变形) my best to learn English,I will succeed.(不包含因果关系)It's a valuable present to me.