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英语改错请问下面这份简历里有没有错误的地方.As a student in English major, I've ma

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英语改错
请问下面这份简历里有没有错误的地方.
As a student in English major, I've mastered basic and essential knowledge and skills in four years studying. I'm an honest, dynamic and mature person with good temper, could get along with people and do my work carefully. I believe I could cooperate with colleagues well and support my supervisor to complete team target, finish them on time. It's all for you to judge whether i'm qualified for this job or not. Wish to get this precious job oppertunity, and I'll finally prove to be a competent candidate for this job.
大的语法错误倒是没有.只是我个人建议,句式不要太单调.不要都以I开头,另外把表示自己有什么的能力长处的句子多用名词短语表达,会更符合英语表达一点.后段部分写的不错