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The Power of Sports to American Culture
Thesis statement:Sports reflect American culture through different angles; for example,sports define the American dream in special ways,sports lead the public fashions,and sports explain why Americans always battle to the last moment.
Topic 1:American dream
Sports define the American dream through their special methods.American dream,the most famous national ethos of the USA,tells that everyone can achieve a better,richer,and happier life only through his or her diligent work in this piece of land; and this is what sports show to public every day.Transferring from nobody to somebody isn’t an isolated instance in sports world; in contrast,it happens every year,every season,and even every game.Almost all super stars experienced it,such as Ming Yao.Ming Yao,playing the center for the Houston Rockets since 2002,is well-known as one of the best center in NBA.However,before he entered the NBA,no one knew him in the United States.Even Charles Barkley,TNT’s commentator,said he would kiss the other commentator’s ass only if Yao could score more than 19 points in one of his rookie-season games.Then he kissed something’s ass.Nowadays,Yao owns the Shanghai Shark team,a music website,and several chain restaurants; in addition,he is a billionaire now.Basketball acts the most important role that helped him to achieve his success.
The Power of Sports to American Culture
Thesis statement:Sports reflect American culture through different angles; for example,sports define the American dream in special ways,sports lead the public fashions,and sports explain why Americans always battle to the last moment.
Topic 1:American dream
Sports define the American dream through their special methods.American dream,the most famous national ethos of the USA,tells that everyone can achieve a better,richer,and happier life only through his or her diligent work in this piece of land; and this is what sports show to public every day.Transferring from nobody to somebody isn’t an isolated instance in sports world; in contrast,it happens every year,every season,and even every game.Almost all super stars experienced it,such as Ming Yao.Ming Yao,playing the center for the Houston Rockets since 2002,is well-known as one of the best center in NBA.However,before he entered the NBA,no one knew him in the United States.Even Charles Barkley,TNT’s commentator,said he would kiss the other commentator’s ass only if Yao could score more than 19 points in one of his rookie-season games.Then he kissed something’s ass.Nowadays,Yao owns the Shanghai Shark team,a music website,and several chain restaurants; in addition,he is a billionaire now.Basketball acts the most important role that helped him to achieve his success.
Line 3:"sports lead the public fashion" (it sounds weird if you use "fashions",the plural version of "fashion" is very unusual.)
Line 8-9:"and this is what sports show to [the] public every day."
Line 18:"Basketball acts [as] the most important role that helped him to achieve his success."
Line 8-9:"and this is what sports show to [the] public every day."
Line 18:"Basketball acts [as] the most important role that helped him to achieve his success."