作业帮大家帮我看看我写的这封给编辑的电子邮件,英文措辞有没有问题呢?
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大家帮我看看我写的这封给编辑的电子邮件,英文措辞有没有问题呢?
I am sorry that I did not express myself clearly.It is the corrected proof instead of “a new manuscript”.I sent the new figure because there is something wrong in the
figure of the proof.Last time,I sent the corrected proof through the NPG Manuscript Tracking System because it seems that the email with large attachment often fail to be received.
Anyway,Prof.Xu have resent the email after me and now we have already received the email from your production team.
Really thanks for your help!
Best wishes,
I am sorry that I did not express myself clearly.It is the corrected proof instead of “a new manuscript”.I sent the new figure because there is something wrong in the
figure of the proof.Last time,I sent the corrected proof through the NPG Manuscript Tracking System because it seems that the email with large attachment often fail to be received.
Anyway,Prof.Xu have resent the email after me and now we have already received the email from your production team.
Really thanks for your help!
Best wishes,
其实如果你发给个外国人看的话他会晕的.事情太绕了,不用写得那么复杂,基本上就把结果告诉他就可以了.
第一句就写 I'm sorry that I didn't make myself clear on the last proof (其实proof到底是个啥,如果你想说样品的话sample比较清楚）, and I've attached a revised figure for your reference now.
Last time开始后面我没搞懂,你说的是你之前发了附件太大他收不到,后来又说徐教授在你之后重发了,最后却是说你从对方生产部收到了邮件,到底是谁给谁发了超大附件这个逻辑我没有理清楚.
然后就跟其他回答的同学说的一样了,Thank you so much for your help. 就行了
第一句就写 I'm sorry that I didn't make myself clear on the last proof (其实proof到底是个啥,如果你想说样品的话sample比较清楚）, and I've attached a revised figure for your reference now.
Last time开始后面我没搞懂,你说的是你之前发了附件太大他收不到,后来又说徐教授在你之后重发了,最后却是说你从对方生产部收到了邮件,到底是谁给谁发了超大附件这个逻辑我没有理清楚.
然后就跟其他回答的同学说的一样了,Thank you so much for your help. 就行了