作业帮请牛人帮忙看看下面写的有没有错的地方帮忙改正
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请牛人帮忙看看下面写的有没有错的地方帮忙改正
Today,we talk about how to make an appointment with doctor.In America,as a rule you should make an appointment before see a doctor if you have sick.There is a exceptional case that you get acute disease can see a doctor directly.
The following conversation will tell us how to make an appointment by call if we fall ill.
Please listen to me：
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This dialogue contain some new words and phrases,i need to explain.
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.the sentence is content of this class.
.ok.This class give us a knowledge of seeing adoctor.Please remember.
这是课堂教学的翻译,请兄弟们帮忙,
Today,we talk about how to make an appointment with doctor.In America,as a rule you should make an appointment before see a doctor if you have sick.There is a exceptional case that you get acute disease can see a doctor directly.
The following conversation will tell us how to make an appointment by call if we fall ill.
Please listen to me：
.
.
This dialogue contain some new words and phrases,i need to explain.
.
.the sentence is content of this class.
.ok.This class give us a knowledge of seeing adoctor.Please remember.
这是课堂教学的翻译,请兄弟们帮忙,
Today,we （这里如果是将要讨论这个内容的话,要用we are going to talk about）talk about how to make an appointment with a doctor.In America,it's almost like a rule that you should make an appointment before seeing the doctor if you are sick.There is a exceptional case if you got acute disease :you can go ask for treatment directly.
The following conversation will teach us how to make an appointment through the phone （既然预约肯定是病了,所以不用重复比较好~）.
Please listen to me：
.
.
This dialogue contains some new words and phrases,i will explain right now（或者at this moment）.
.
.the sentence is content of this class.(不确定你这里要说什么,只有一句话么?不过这句语法没什么问题)
.ok.This class gives us the knowledge of seeing a doctor by making an appointment first.Please keep this fresh in mind.
有些句子大体没什么问题不过我还是改了,因为说起来非常不顺畅,太过书面.
如果有任何问题,欢迎追问~
再问： 谢谢，那兄弟再帮我看一下我的这个自我介绍有没有上面问题 hello，everyone！I'm 。。。，born in anhui，south of china 。I graduated from anhui normal university in july ，2010. My major is politics education。I studied courses such as education and psychic。
The following conversation will teach us how to make an appointment through the phone （既然预约肯定是病了,所以不用重复比较好~）.
Please listen to me：
.
.
This dialogue contains some new words and phrases,i will explain right now（或者at this moment）.
.
.the sentence is content of this class.(不确定你这里要说什么,只有一句话么?不过这句语法没什么问题)
.ok.This class gives us the knowledge of seeing a doctor by making an appointment first.Please keep this fresh in mind.
有些句子大体没什么问题不过我还是改了,因为说起来非常不顺畅,太过书面.
如果有任何问题,欢迎追问~
再问： 谢谢，那兄弟再帮我看一下我的这个自我介绍有没有上面问题 hello，everyone！I'm 。。。，born in anhui，south of china 。I graduated from anhui normal university in july ，2010. My major is politics education。I studied courses such as education and psychic。