实在是太差1）In addition,when we doing the energy awareness survey

实在是太差
1）In addition,when we doing the energy awareness survey around endcliffe.After we gathering the information from students at endliffe.We also have to use analytical skills.We analyze the results of the all questionnaire by making graphs.For example a graph to show how important do students think saving energy is?
2）Overall,I think our group did well.We had a regular meeting every week,normally at Information commons,no one absent.In addition,any problems will be solved during the meeting.In order to raise the student's awareness of energy saving,we went to Endcliffe sending the questionnaire and fliers.Through that kind of activity,our relationships with each group member become more harmonious.
3）It made finishing up the presentation a lot easier and faster.（这句话不用改语法,帮我parapharse一下）

1)只有从句没有主句.In addition,when we doing the energy awareness survey around endcliffe.,after we gathering the information from students at endliffe,we still had to use analytical skills.We analyzed the results of the all questionnaire by making graphs.How about a graph to show how important do students think saving energy is?
2)Overall,I think our group did well.We had a regular meeting every week,normally at Information commons,and no one absent.Furthermore,all the problems are solved during the meeting.In order to raise the student's awareness of energy saving,we went to Endcliffe sending the questionnaires and fliers.Through that kind of activity,our relationships with each group member become more harmonious.
3)It made finishing up the presentation a lot easier and faster.
---->This helps to end the presentation simplier and more quickly.
1和2已经修改.主要问题存在于主句从句部分,因此我将从句变成状语从句的省略（非谓语）,之后的很多部分细节例如反复出现的In addition替换成Furthermore,和部分表达不恰当等已经修改.3也paraphrase了.
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再问： 为什么第一句的最后一句改成了 How about a graph to show how important do students think saving energy is?
再答： “and no one was absent. ”少打了个was。恩。抱歉。后面的那个问题被解决（all the problems那里），你看是什么时态，我不知道你那里什么情况。如果是过去就过去式，现在就are，将来就将来。希望对你有所帮助！