Dear teachers:

Dear teachers:
My name’s XXX and I are from XXX.I feel much honored to have the opportunity to be here today to Qingdao Sea University the autonomous enrolment.As all students here,I'm only an ordinary high school student.However,I hope you can know a different me from my introduction of my self .Therefore; I will use three keywords to introduce yourself.
First:determination.As a key national university of China,it is dream of being a student of XXX.And I never give up.Therefore,even today facing many competitors,I wouldn't give up; I will insist my dream forever.
Second:ability.I say ability includes two aspects,learning ability and other abilities.In the study,I have a firm belief and unique way.When I entered the high school as a grade 1 student,I faced a big difficulty in studying math.But I did not give up.I spear no pains to learn,and with teachers and classmates’ help,I broke the bottleneck of mathematics,and success in the stable over 130 points.This is the best proof of my ability to learn.In other respects,I served as the vice chairman of the school,the party responsible in class,group activities and class organization processing.Every art festival has my effort,which made me feel really proud.In addition,I also learn geography research report "China geographic" of geography,which encourages me to apply theory to practice.
Third:personality.Although I am a girl,my character is optimistic,cheerful,which mostly due to my love for sports.On the campus,I often participate in basketball activities,and sometimes even take match with boys.And I have learned a lot of happy and moved,which are my wealth.
Thanks again for you gave me a chance to show myself,and I hope you can give me a chance to prove myself.Thank you.

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Dear teachers:
My name (is) 重要的文件一般不要用索写 XXX and I (am) from XXX. I feel (very) honored to have the opportunity to be here today (at) Qingdao Sea University the autonomous (enrollment). As all (of the) students here, I'm only an ordinary high school student. However, I hope you can (get to) know a different (version of) me (through) my introduction of (myself).Therefore(,) I will use three keywords to (describe) (myself).
First: determination. (Because XXX is) a key national university of China, it is (my)dream (to be one of its students).I never (gave) up (on achieving this goal). (So) 你已经用了一次thereore, 所以应换另外个词, even today (while) facing many competitors, I (would not)give up; I will (pursue) my dream (tenaciously).
Second: ability. (To me) ability includes two aspects, learning ability and other abilities. (During my studies), I have a firm belief and unique way. When I entered high school as a grade 1 student, I faced a big difficulty in studying math. But I did not give up. I (feared) 你原来用地spear说不通, 不懂你想要表达什么 no pains (during my learning), and (with the help of my) teachers and classmates, I broke (through) the bottleneck of mathematics, and success in the stable over 130 points. This is the best proof of my ability to learn. In other respects, I served as the vice chairman of the school, the party responsible in class, group activities and class organization processing. Every art (festivals) has (evidence of) my (efforts), which made me feel really proud. In addition, I also learn geography research report "China geographic" of geography, which encourages me to apply theory to practice.
Third: personality. Although I am a girl, (I am known to be) optimistic and cheerful, which mostly due to my love for sports. On the campus, I often participate in basketball activities, and sometimes even (compete in matches)with boys. And I have learned a lot of happy and moved, which are my wealth.(上句话不对,不知道你想说什么,所以我不知道要从哪方面来改.你可以把你想要说的写成中文,我可以帮一翻译成英语)Thanks again for you gave me a chance to (present) myself, and I hope you can give me a chance to prove myself. Thank you.