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短文改错 急 50分As students,we have classes from early morning til

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短文改错 急 50分
As students,we have classes from early morning till late afternoon.Therefore,take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important,even necessary.Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired.During the ten-minute break we did something to get rid of tiredness.What we need is to have real rest,instead of getting even tired.So don't do anything that will make you too excited.My ten-minute break is always pleased.I usually do some simple exercises.Sometime I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk during the break.When the new class begins,I feel freshly again.
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1.take a ten-minute → taking a ten-minute
动名词短语作句子主语
2.between class → between classes
两堂课的课间
3.or mentally tired → and mentally tired
固定结构:both...and...
4.we did something → we do something
句子时态大多用一般现在时
5.have real rest → have a real rest
have a rest是固定短语,a不能少
6.getting even tired → getting even more tired
“甚至更加疲倦”,句意明显是比较级
7.is always pleased → is always pleasing/pleasant
pleased意思是“感到高兴/满意的”;pleasing/pleasant意思是“令人高兴/满意的”
8.do some simple exercises → do some simple exercise
do exercise“锻炼/做操”,其中exercise是不可数名词
9.Sometime I have → Sometimes I have
sometime意思是“某个时刻”,sometimes意为“有时”
10.I feel freshly again → I feel refreshed again
refreshed意思是“精力得到恢复/精神振作的”