作业帮谁能帮我找一下这篇英语文章上的错误……格式错误也包括在内~我是大一新生…… I'm freshman
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谁能帮我找一下这篇英语文章上的错误……格式错误也包括在内~我是大一新生…… I'm freshman
Dear parents:
How's it going?I miss you very much!Is everything OK?I heard my grandpa was ill.I hope he can feel well soon.
Now,I'm in the college.As a freshman,I know I have many things to study.In my eyes,everything seems very fresh,such as teachersclassmates,beautiful campus and so on.I always smill to everybody,and get closed to them.I take part in many activities.In it I singing songs,dancing.It's not only to show myself,but also improve my ability that I can applicte in my job.
Now,I have a boyfriend.I don't think this is a negative thing for me.In my opinion,I think it's a way in which I can know about boy.Leaving away from home,I also need a person who can take care of me.
Everything is Ok,and I love you.
Yours sincerely
your daughter
Dear parents:
How's it going?I miss you very much!Is everything OK?I heard my grandpa was ill.I hope he can feel well soon.
Now,I'm in the college.As a freshman,I know I have many things to study.In my eyes,everything seems very fresh,such as teachersclassmates,beautiful campus and so on.I always smill to everybody,and get closed to them.I take part in many activities.In it I singing songs,dancing.It's not only to show myself,but also improve my ability that I can applicte in my job.
Now,I have a boyfriend.I don't think this is a negative thing for me.In my opinion,I think it's a way in which I can know about boy.Leaving away from home,I also need a person who can take care of me.
Everything is Ok,and I love you.
Yours sincerely
your daughter
I'm freshman -- I'm a freshman
How's it going?- How are you?or How's it going on (about your health etc.go on表示进展,进行的意思的
Is everything OK?- 这句话跟上一句是重复的,要删除.
smill -- keep smiling
In it -- Here
singing - sing,dancing - and dance,需要用谓语动词,而不是动名词
improve -- to imporve,前后要对称,都要用动词不定式作为目的.
applicte in -- apply into,apply sth into sth,固定短语,表示将--应用于---
Everything is Ok --- Everything is Ok with me
其它的没有语法错误.我觉得写的意思都表现的很简洁,一目了然,蛮好的.
How's it going?- How are you?or How's it going on (about your health etc.go on表示进展,进行的意思的
Is everything OK?- 这句话跟上一句是重复的,要删除.
smill -- keep smiling
In it -- Here
singing - sing,dancing - and dance,需要用谓语动词,而不是动名词
improve -- to imporve,前后要对称,都要用动词不定式作为目的.
applicte in -- apply into,apply sth into sth,固定短语,表示将--应用于---
Everything is Ok --- Everything is Ok with me
其它的没有语法错误.我觉得写的意思都表现的很简洁,一目了然,蛮好的.