作业帮帮忙看下面一段英文,有无语法错误,
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帮忙看下面一段英文,有无语法错误,
Middle autumn day is very special for Chinese people.On that day,it’s a chance for every family members to get together and celebrate the festival.I think my best time in a year is middle autumn day because I have a wonderful memory about that day when I was ten years old.An that night,the moon was the biggest one during a year.After supper,My parent put chairs in the inner yard.My sister is a musician.She played a piece of music in front of piano for us.When we eating mooncakes,listening a romantic music,appreciating the moon in the starry sky.What a beautiful moment in the world.I will never forget that enjoyable night in my memory
什么小毛病。提个醒？在哪方面
Middle autumn day is very special for Chinese people.On that day,it’s a chance for every family members to get together and celebrate the festival.I think my best time in a year is middle autumn day because I have a wonderful memory about that day when I was ten years old.An that night,the moon was the biggest one during a year.After supper,My parent put chairs in the inner yard.My sister is a musician.She played a piece of music in front of piano for us.When we eating mooncakes,listening a romantic music,appreciating the moon in the starry sky.What a beautiful moment in the world.I will never forget that enjoyable night in my memory
什么小毛病。提个醒？在哪方面
中秋节应该是Mid-Autumn day,第三行“i have a wonderful momory”里面的have应该用had,
“She played a piece of music in front of piano for us. When we eating mooncakes, listening a romantic music, appreciating the moon in the starry sky. ”
piano 前面应该要加a/the.when we “were” eating啦.
语法的话就没有很多错误,但是整篇文章有很多问题
“She played a piece of music in front of piano for us. When we eating mooncakes, listening a romantic music, appreciating the moon in the starry sky. ”
piano 前面应该要加a/the.when we “were” eating啦.
语法的话就没有很多错误,但是整篇文章有很多问题