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DEAR Mr.Frassenei:To tell the ture,you are the most the most

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DEAR Mr.Frassenei:To tell the ture,you are the most the most passionate people I spoke to in the A
我想问一下这封邮件有没有错误,错误在哪里,指出的越详细越好,如果我觉得很满意的话,
DEAR Mr.Frassenei:
To tell the ture,you are the most the most passionate people I spoke to in the AUTOMATION FAIR。As I you told you my job is responsible for the international logistics,so i go to every exhibition to get the name card i try to find my customer,but there are some people when they don't need my help and just say nothing with a stony expression。So,I avail this email to express my heartfelt thanks。
我倒是觉得语气格式欠妥.既然是感谢信么,首先就要表示感谢,不需要批评别人,只要表扬他就好了.还有不能说my job is responsible.可以说i'm responsible for,或是i'm in charge of 什么的.还有avail this email是什么意思.就用send,或write就好了.虽然语言只是用来沟通,但外国人对我们讲英语也很宽容,不说那么漂亮和地道,但表达清楚还是很重要的.