作业帮英语改错,下面一段话有没有语法错误,谢谢
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英语改错,下面一段话有没有语法错误,谢谢
This student is enterprising, optimistic and excellent ,who has good abilities in learning and innovation. Participating in school activities actively,she was equipped with team spirit and adaptable, besides, she won scholarship at school for many times. So I hope you can give her a chance to study in University of XX for further study.
This student is enterprising, optimistic and excellent ,who has good abilities in learning and innovation. Participating in school activities actively,she was equipped with team spirit and adaptable, besides, she won scholarship at school for many times. So I hope you can give her a chance to study in University of XX for further study.
This student is enterprising,optimistic and excellent ,who has good abilities in studying and innovating.She always takes an active part in school activities and has team spirit .She is adaptable,Besides,she won scholarship at school many times.So I hope you can give her a chance for her further study in XX University .