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修改英语语法错误In Facing death and pleaded:"Bill,dear Bill,you cann

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修改英语语法错误
In Facing death and pleaded:"Bill,dear Bill,you cannot have the heart to kill me.
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From the previous section in Nancy's identity,we know that Nancy was made a choice between in starvation and do a thief to survive when she was four or five years old.
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范,请检查!
Nancy's tragic life was directly determined the character in formation,and with her character determined her tragic fate
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1 In facing death,he pleaded,"Bill,dear Bill,you cannot have the heart to kill me."
2 From the previous section in Nancy's identity,we know that when Nancy was four or five years old,she was to make a choice between dying in starvation and surviving as a thief.
3 Nancy's tragic life determined directly the character in formation,and her character,in turn,determined her tragic fate.
我只是修改了句子的语法,有些内容我也没弄懂你想表达的东西,刚去你说的那个网站试过了,第二句和第三句都没什么问题,第一句只要去掉Bill,dear Bill也没问题(但这种呼唤语本就不属于常规语法,写上也不是错的).
再问: 第一个问题这样的:面对死亡时,他祈求道:比尔,亲爱的比尔,你不会忍心把我杀死的

第二个句子:从前面关于南希身世的段落,我们可以看出,南希为了生存,在她4到5岁的时候,他就已经在挨饿和做小偷之间做出了选择性格的形成,

第三个句子:南希悲惨的生活决定了,并且她的性格决定了她的命运

这回理解原文意思,你再试着帮我改改,原文句子哪里不要动,前面面对死亡,他祈求道,是我自己写的,因为这个是英语毕业论文
再答: 哦,原来是想表达这样的意思。没问题就好。