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英语改错Dear Li Xiaojun,I'm glad to receive your letter.I'd like

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英语改错
Dear Li Xiaojun,
I'm glad to receive your letter.I'd like to discuss about the problem with you.It is true which some video games is good for your thinking ability and they can sometimes make you feel relaxed.Therefore,you are spending too much time on that.You aren't little boy any more.You should learn to control yourself.Why not to try to finish your homework first every day and then spend a little time play some video games.I think,like a student,the most important thing is to study hard at school.Yuo should try your best to do good in your subjects and try to become a usrful person for the future.
第一行:把about去掉,discuss是及物动词
第二行:把which改成that
第三行:意思应为转折,therefore改成however
第四行:why not后直接跟动词,把to去掉
第五行:spend sth doing,所以把play改成playing
第六行:like a student,改成as a student,作为一个学生,还有you好像打错了
第七行:do good改成do well