作业帮我是初二的学生,写了两篇英语作文,求大神帮我挑挑错
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我是初二的学生,写了两篇英语作文,求大神帮我挑挑错
Thanksgiving Day is coming.I plan to thank my mother.Because she look after me every day.I am cooking many food for my mother.And than I am helping my mother to clean our house.I am going shopping with my mom.I want to say to my mother "Mother,thank you a lot!I love you "
I have two friends.They are LiMing and ZhangHua.THYhave many difference.LiMing is outgoing and funny.He often takes me laugh.But ZhangHua is serious and calm .He is as athletic and friendly as LiMing.And LiMing likes eating fruit.ZhangHua likes to eat vegetables .He drinks it's good for his health .LiMing likes drinking milk .But ZhangHua likes drinking water.
Thanksgiving Day is coming.I plan to thank my mother.Because she look after me every day.I am cooking many food for my mother.And than I am helping my mother to clean our house.I am going shopping with my mom.I want to say to my mother "Mother,thank you a lot!I love you "
I have two friends.They are LiMing and ZhangHua.THYhave many difference.LiMing is outgoing and funny.He often takes me laugh.But ZhangHua is serious and calm .He is as athletic and friendly as LiMing.And LiMing likes eating fruit.ZhangHua likes to eat vegetables .He drinks it's good for his health .LiMing likes drinking milk .But ZhangHua likes drinking water.
Because she looks after me every day
And then I am helping my mother to clean our house
第一篇作文没有连词作辅助,整篇文章显得是组装起来的
I WILL=I going to
所以这两个词一起用,才不会显得文章单调
除了第一句,就没有添加其他特色句子,这种作文的分数一般不搞
再问： 嘻嘻~没关系，只要其他对了就好。谢谢你啦
And then I am helping my mother to clean our house
第一篇作文没有连词作辅助,整篇文章显得是组装起来的
I WILL=I going to
所以这两个词一起用,才不会显得文章单调
除了第一句,就没有添加其他特色句子,这种作文的分数一般不搞
再问： 嘻嘻~没关系，只要其他对了就好。谢谢你啦
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