【急】我是一名初一学生,这是我写的第一篇英语作文,求批改(不要太长)谢谢!
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【急】我是一名初一学生,这是我写的第一篇英语作文,求批改(不要太长)谢谢!
My family
I have a happy family.
There are four people in my family.My mother,father,brother and me.
I love my mother.She is very beautiful.She can will do very delicious meal.She love me too.
My father is very strict .And I have a brother .He is twenty-two years old .But he likes playing computer games.In any day,I can see he playing computer game.I think this is very ridiculous.
I am a student.I am Student at the number one middle school.
I love my family.
My family
I have a happy family.
There are four people in my family.My mother,father,brother and me.
I love my mother.She is very beautiful.She can will do very delicious meal.She love me too.
My father is very strict .And I have a brother .He is twenty-two years old .But he likes playing computer games.In any day,I can see he playing computer game.I think this is very ridiculous.
I am a student.I am Student at the number one middle school.
I love my family.
1.She can will do very delicious meal典型错句子,用了can就行了will就别再用了,注意句子结构,还有做饭用cook应该更好些,不知道你们学了没有,用do感觉搭配不是很好.
2.She love.love应该加s,第三人称单数,初中的考点,多注意下.And I have a brother 有点多余,前面不是已经说了.In any day换成I can see he playing computer game everyday,是不是更好些.都是细节问题,初次学外语多备些东西就能写好了.
2.She love.love应该加s,第三人称单数,初中的考点,多注意下.And I have a brother 有点多余,前面不是已经说了.In any day换成I can see he playing computer game everyday,是不是更好些.都是细节问题,初次学外语多备些东西就能写好了.
【急】我是一名初一学生,这是我写的第一篇英语作文,求批改(不要太长)谢谢!
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