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英语作文续写加改错 帮我把这篇文章续写下,我实在写不下去了,前文有错的帮忙改下,
Do you like children Do you like looking after children?
Yesterday ,I went to visit my uncle .My uncle and aunt ‘s daughter ‘s name is Mao Kexin ,we called her Xinxin .Xinxin is only 3 years old .She is very cute and clever .So we all like her very much..
In the afternoon ,my father ,mother ,aunt and uncle were all going out .Just Xinxin and me stayed at home .They let me take care of Xinxin.
I hugged her to sit on the sofa to watch TV .Xinxin wanted to watch cartoons,so Iput the television show the animations .After a while ,she seems hungry ,so she cried for eating .Then I gave her a box of milk and a piece of bread .After that ,she smiled happily ,and continued to watch the cartoon.
But good times didn’t last long ,after a long time .I put her on the sofa ,but she accidentally in the sofa pee.I’m very surprised and unhappy .I quickly with a towel to wipe up the sofa .
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Do you like children Do you like looking after children?
Yesterday ,I went to visit my uncle .My uncle and aunt ‘s daughter ‘s name is Mao Kexin ,we call her Xinxin .Xinxin is only 3 years old .She is very cute and clever .So we all like her very much..
In the afternoon ,my father ,mother ,aunt and uncle were all going out .Just Xinxin and me stayed at home .They let me take care of Xinxin.
I hugged her to sit on the sofa to watch TV .Xinxin wanted to watch cartoons,so I put the television show the animations .After a while ,she seemed hungry ,so she cried for eating .Then I gave her a carton of milk and a piece of bread .After that ,she smiled happily ,and continued to watch the cartoon.
But good times didn’t last long ,after a long time .I put her on the sofa ,but she accidentally pee in the sofa .I’m very surprised and unhappy .I quickly used a towel to wipe up the sofa and clean up the pee.
in some ways,children are trouble,but they are very lovely and lively,their lives are very free,they do not need to worry about many things.If i stay with them.I can forget the trouble.Children are pure.when i am with them,my heart is also clean and honest.
i love children!i love to stay with them!
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