作业帮帮我检查一下英语日记我是一名刚学英文的菜鸟,写了篇英语日记,Saturday,October 11,2009Today
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帮我检查一下英语日记
我是一名刚学英文的菜鸟,写了篇英语日记,
Saturday,October 11,2009
Today i book a basic class .The class's subject is weather.The weather has another mean that
describe the somebody was ill.For example "I'm under the weather" .In the class a girl is as white as snow
sat by my side.But i still go to listen to the teacher.Today It's cloud(overcast).I like cloud very much.i
offten walk on the street that wait for rainning when it's cloud.The wind is blowing than i walking in the
rain.it's feel so good.But sometime it's stormy than lightning usually accompanies thunder bad luck.
Many people like sunny.In the hoilday someboday have a sunbath at the seaside.some clouds floating
in the sky so beautiful.The temperature between 33 and 36 degrees celsiues(centigrade) so
comfortable.
我是一名刚学英文的菜鸟,写了篇英语日记,
Saturday,October 11,2009
Today i book a basic class .The class's subject is weather.The weather has another mean that
describe the somebody was ill.For example "I'm under the weather" .In the class a girl is as white as snow
sat by my side.But i still go to listen to the teacher.Today It's cloud(overcast).I like cloud very much.i
offten walk on the street that wait for rainning when it's cloud.The wind is blowing than i walking in the
rain.it's feel so good.But sometime it's stormy than lightning usually accompanies thunder bad luck.
Many people like sunny.In the hoilday someboday have a sunbath at the seaside.some clouds floating
in the sky so beautiful.The temperature between 33 and 36 degrees celsiues(centigrade) so
comfortable.
Saturday,October 11,2009
Today I have booked a basic class .The class's subject was weather.Weather has another meaning which describes that somebody is ill,for example,I'm under the weather.A girl sat by my side has a white skin as the snow.But I still listened carefully to the teacher.Today is cloudy (overcast).I like cloud very much.I often walk on the street and wait for raining when it's cloudy.The wind is blowing when I walking in the rain.It feels so good.But sometime it's stormy and lightning usually accompanies thunder.Many people like sunny.In the holiday many people will have a sunbath by the seaside.Some clouds floating in the sky so beautiful.The temperature between 33 and 36 degrees Celsius (centigrade) is so comfortable.
太中式化了,又不方便改变你的句式,只改了语法错误.
Today I have booked a basic class .The class's subject was weather.Weather has another meaning which describes that somebody is ill,for example,I'm under the weather.A girl sat by my side has a white skin as the snow.But I still listened carefully to the teacher.Today is cloudy (overcast).I like cloud very much.I often walk on the street and wait for raining when it's cloudy.The wind is blowing when I walking in the rain.It feels so good.But sometime it's stormy and lightning usually accompanies thunder.Many people like sunny.In the holiday many people will have a sunbath by the seaside.Some clouds floating in the sky so beautiful.The temperature between 33 and 36 degrees Celsius (centigrade) is so comfortable.
太中式化了,又不方便改变你的句式,只改了语法错误.
帮我检查一下英语日记我是一名刚学英文的菜鸟,写了篇英语日记,Saturday,October 11,2009Today
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