作业帮200分求改英语作文~
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200分求改英语作文~
There are at least two similarities between studying in China and in abroad.Firstly,both of these two ways are studying in a classroom with a teacher.It’s the teacher who plays a very important role in studying ,not only in China but also in abroad.Secondly,for both of them,communicationg is important.Not only communicate with teachers but also with classmates.It’s really necessary for you if you want to learn something.Above all,these two similarities are the characters of studying all over the world.
Just like a coin has two sides,they have something in common of course they have something different.First,even for both of them ,teachers are very important but there’s something different.In China,teachers give you the knowledge that is true,no doubt,while teachers give you some ideas ,disscuss with you and let you know it’s true or false in abroad.More over,studying in abroad means you have to live live far away from home.Everything belong yourself.So you have to take care of yourself.In China,maybe you can focus your attention on studying more than studying in abroad.What’s more,languages between two countries are also different.Knowledge will be taught in a completely different language .That means you have to learn much more than each other if you want to study abroad.However language wouldn’t be a problem and it must be easier to understand what teachers are sayingthan that in abroad.Indeed,even studying in China and in abroad have something in common,they are absolutely different.
肯定是一篇不是特别好的作文,清高手帮忙改正语法错误,有些CHINAENGLISH也请帮忙改成英语习惯表达发~
There are at least two similarities between studying in China and in abroad.Firstly,both of these two ways are studying in a classroom with a teacher.It’s the teacher who plays a very important role in studying ,not only in China but also in abroad.Secondly,for both of them,communicationg is important.Not only communicate with teachers but also with classmates.It’s really necessary for you if you want to learn something.Above all,these two similarities are the characters of studying all over the world.
Just like a coin has two sides,they have something in common of course they have something different.First,even for both of them ,teachers are very important but there’s something different.In China,teachers give you the knowledge that is true,no doubt,while teachers give you some ideas ,disscuss with you and let you know it’s true or false in abroad.More over,studying in abroad means you have to live live far away from home.Everything belong yourself.So you have to take care of yourself.In China,maybe you can focus your attention on studying more than studying in abroad.What’s more,languages between two countries are also different.Knowledge will be taught in a completely different language .That means you have to learn much more than each other if you want to study abroad.However language wouldn’t be a problem and it must be easier to understand what teachers are sayingthan that in abroad.Indeed,even studying in China and in abroad have something in common,they are absolutely different.
肯定是一篇不是特别好的作文,清高手帮忙改正语法错误,有些CHINAENGLISH也请帮忙改成英语习惯表达发~
没有in abroad一说 abroad本身就是副词
第二句话不好,不通顺又啰嗦!
both of them 可以去掉,无用,完全充字数.communicationg 不好,动名是可以作主语 但不是这么用 改成communicationg with others.
something 后加 more .
第二段第一句应分成两句.of course前加一句号
while teachers 改为while foreign teachers. in aboard去掉
more over 不能单独使用 你可能要表达此外的意思 用 what is more
belong 加S
还有一些错误,有些是你打错了,还有一些表达不好,自己多琢磨琢磨吧
第二句话不好,不通顺又啰嗦!
both of them 可以去掉,无用,完全充字数.communicationg 不好,动名是可以作主语 但不是这么用 改成communicationg with others.
something 后加 more .
第二段第一句应分成两句.of course前加一句号
while teachers 改为while foreign teachers. in aboard去掉
more over 不能单独使用 你可能要表达此外的意思 用 what is more
belong 加S
还有一些错误,有些是你打错了,还有一些表达不好,自己多琢磨琢磨吧