求一篇英语作文 不要范文!要是自己写的!

求一篇英语作文 不要范文!要是自己写的!
假如你是某家英文报社的编辑,昨日收到一位中学生读者王丽的来信.请根据来信内容和所给的要点提示用英语写一封回信.词数120左右.
Dear Editor,
I am a hardworking girl and want to be the number one in my class.But in the exams,I always make mistakes that Ishould have avoided.I really worry about it.What can I do to improve my performance in exams?
Wang Li
提示：1.不要压力太大
2.如果有问题,请教老师或者同学；
3.考试是合理分配时间并尽量抽出几分钟检查.
注意：1.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
2.书信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数.
参考词汇：分配distribute
Dear Wang Li,
It's good that you know what pervents you achieving satisfying sccores in exams.

However,hardworking doesn"t necessaryly mean that you can do good in exams.There are several ways for you to improve you performances in exams.
First of all,a good mentality is of great importance.You should adjust you mood and lower you pressure,try to breathe deeply.In the second place,when you come across difficult problemes,you can turn to your teachers and classmates.Last but not least,distributing time properly in exams and setting aside a few of minutes for cheching can promote your accuracy.
I sincerely hope that you can use these technics to improve your grades.
再问： necessaryly？是不是打错了哦？
再答： However,hardworking doesn"t necessarily mean that you can do good in exams.There are several ways for you to improve you performances in exams. First of all,a good mentality is of great importance.You should adjust you mood and lower you pressure,try to breathe deeply.In the second place,when you come across difficult problemes,you can turn to your teachers and classmates.Last but not least,distributing time properly in exams and setting aside a few of minutes for cheching can promote your accuracy. I sincerely hope that you can use these technics to improve your grades.