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这句话语法对吗? 怎么改才通顺啊? 求帮助!

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这句话语法对吗? 怎么改才通顺啊? 求帮助!
This report will provide ourteam how to operating a car company which is grown up from a new firm without any experience becomes a high profitable company.
此句语法上问题在于how加不定式而不是分词,而且信息太累赘冗余
可以改成
This report will provide our team how to develop an auto company from a brandnew one to a high profitable one.
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