这一篇为何只有14分Dear editor:I am a high school student in Wuhan.Re

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这一篇为何只有14分
Dear editor:
I am a high school student in Wuhan.Recently our city is implementating a free bike rental service,which is warmly welcomed by citizens.
The sdrvice is so great that it not only provides convenience for people but also it helps to protect the environment by reducing the amount of hamful gases.But on the other hand,as a consequence of many people desperately want to apply for the cards which are used to rent bikes,it is a little hard to get a card.Neanwhile,a few people use bikes slong that sometimes there is no bikes available.
I think we should continue to carry out this service,but we must change some places.For example,wemay as well set up more places where people can apply for the cards.And we can put up a fining system to prevent the phenomenon of keeping bikes for too long.

可能你字写得不好
有语法错误如set up more places put up a fining system
有中式英语
结构不是十分清晰
类容不是十分充分举一些实际的例子更有说服力

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