作业帮英语作文修改 是一篇自我介绍 真心不长100多字
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英语作文修改 是一篇自我介绍 真心不长100多字
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen.
My name is xxx Zhangyunying and my number is ….I am a sweet girl from cz,and also you can call me Tracy.
My dream is to be a female astronaut in the future.Recently the Shenzhou V manned spacecraft has managed to carry three astronauts,including China's first female astronaut,Liu Yang.I want to be a person like her who is full of courage and confidence,wearing the space suit to win glory for the country.
I think xxxEnglish Competition is a steep mountain for me to climb,but still,I am trying every possible effort to reach the top of it.As the old saying goes that Where there's a will,there's a way,I am full of confidence and I’m sure that I can be the winner.
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen.
My name is xxx Zhangyunying and my number is ….I am a sweet girl from cz,and also you can call me Tracy.
My dream is to be a female astronaut in the future.Recently the Shenzhou V manned spacecraft has managed to carry three astronauts,including China's first female astronaut,Liu Yang.I want to be a person like her who is full of courage and confidence,wearing the space suit to win glory for the country.
I think xxxEnglish Competition is a steep mountain for me to climb,but still,I am trying every possible effort to reach the top of it.As the old saying goes that Where there's a will,there's a way,I am full of confidence and I’m sure that I can be the winner.
1、我觉得写得还是很不错的,但是我觉得自我介绍里还是多介绍一些自己的个性特征和特质会比较好吧,当宇航员这种梦想太普遍了,不是特别有吸引力.
2、可以采用那种there is a girl,she is...she is ..she is ..she is..and the girl is me.这种排比句,虽然老套,但是比较能抓住听众的耳朵,逻辑性也强一些吧.
3、最后一段还不错就不用改了吧.
4、以上纯属个人意见,仅供参考,希望你能在比赛中取得好成绩
（cz是指常州么,我也是常州人耶.）
2、可以采用那种there is a girl,she is...she is ..she is ..she is..and the girl is me.这种排比句,虽然老套,但是比较能抓住听众的耳朵,逻辑性也强一些吧.
3、最后一段还不错就不用改了吧.
4、以上纯属个人意见,仅供参考,希望你能在比赛中取得好成绩
（cz是指常州么,我也是常州人耶.）