作业帮请达人帮我看一下这段话有什么语法问题吗?
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请达人帮我看一下这段话有什么语法问题吗?
dear diary,
today is a sunny day.in the morning,my parents went to water scence city to watch the flat.
my mother said that they decided to buy a flat which is in the 12 floor.
i said that is so high.
and then my uncle and aunt went to our home wanting to watch our new flat .now they're talking about house's problems.
such as the price of the house nowadays.
and i'm just studying in the study room feeling so boring,because i'm tired of listening to numbers.
and we have decided to eat lunch with my uncle and aunt.there are crabs in today's menu.
hope there are just a little grammar problems above.
dear diary,
today is a sunny day.in the morning,my parents went to water scence city to watch the flat.
my mother said that they decided to buy a flat which is in the 12 floor.
i said that is so high.
and then my uncle and aunt went to our home wanting to watch our new flat .now they're talking about house's problems.
such as the price of the house nowadays.
and i'm just studying in the study room feeling so boring,because i'm tired of listening to numbers.
and we have decided to eat lunch with my uncle and aunt.there are crabs in today's menu.
hope there are just a little grammar problems above.
如果单说语法问题的话,
my mother said that they decided to buy a flat which is in the 12 floor.→my mother said that they decided to buy a flat which was in the 12 floor.因为前面是said
同样的,i said that is so high.改成was so high
文章的表达和衔接有点奇怪啊
my mother said that they decided to buy a flat which is in the 12 floor.→my mother said that they decided to buy a flat which was in the 12 floor.因为前面是said
同样的,i said that is so high.改成was so high
文章的表达和衔接有点奇怪啊