作业帮英语高手进来哈~帮我修改一下这篇文章
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英语高手进来哈~帮我修改一下这篇文章
这篇文章是我要比赛的,包括细节的语法错误,感激不尽~
Music and me
When I was a child,I was fascinated by the melody of piano on the screen.At that time,I dreamed of being a pianist and having my own piano.
At the age of six,my mom bought me a beautiful piano as my birthday present with the money they had saved for a long time.At the same time,my mom found a piano teacher for me and every day I would practise it again and again as my mother demanded.Learning for three years,little by little,I am interested in singing.I sing for no particular purpose.You like this program so much,it brings a lot of fun and joy to you,especially the English songs.When you are studying very hard,and feel exhausted,you often turn on the radio and listen to this program.You also have been learning a lot of words from it.In short,I sing for fun.There is no limit to what I sing,so long as it can let out my emotion and pass the pleasant voice to others.It is something more satisfactory and exciting to draw echoes from them.It is nothing bad to spread joy around,is it?
As far as,music is inportant for me.it can makes me to learn more interesting things and maintain a good mood.So I like music very much.As you can tell,music is my second life.
Thank you very much.
这篇文章是我要比赛的,包括细节的语法错误,感激不尽~
Music and me
When I was a child,I was fascinated by the melody of piano on the screen.At that time,I dreamed of being a pianist and having my own piano.
At the age of six,my mom bought me a beautiful piano as my birthday present with the money they had saved for a long time.At the same time,my mom found a piano teacher for me and every day I would practise it again and again as my mother demanded.Learning for three years,little by little,I am interested in singing.I sing for no particular purpose.You like this program so much,it brings a lot of fun and joy to you,especially the English songs.When you are studying very hard,and feel exhausted,you often turn on the radio and listen to this program.You also have been learning a lot of words from it.In short,I sing for fun.There is no limit to what I sing,so long as it can let out my emotion and pass the pleasant voice to others.It is something more satisfactory and exciting to draw echoes from them.It is nothing bad to spread joy around,is it?
As far as,music is inportant for me.it can makes me to learn more interesting things and maintain a good mood.So I like music very much.As you can tell,music is my second life.
Thank you very much.
Music and me
When I was a child,I was fascinated by the melody of piano on the screen.At that time,I dreamed of being a pianist and having my own piano.one day.
At the age of six,my mom bought me a beautiful piano as my birthday present with the money she had saved for a long time.At the same time,she found a piano teacher for me and every day I would practise it again and again as my mother demanded.After learning it for three years,little by little,I begin to show great interest in singing.I sing for nothing.i just like it very much,because it brings a lot of fun and joy to me,After i study for a long time,and feel exhausted,i often turn on the radio and listen to music.i also have been learning a lot of words from it.In short,I sing for fun.There is no limit to what I sing,so long as it can let out my emotion and pass the pleasant voice to others.It is something more satisfactory and exciting to draw echoes from them than to do anything.It is nothing bad to spread joy around,is it?
in a word,music is important to me.it can make me learn more interesting things and maintain a good mood.So I like music very much.As I can tell,music is my second life.
Thank you very much.
When I was a child,I was fascinated by the melody of piano on the screen.At that time,I dreamed of being a pianist and having my own piano.one day.
At the age of six,my mom bought me a beautiful piano as my birthday present with the money she had saved for a long time.At the same time,she found a piano teacher for me and every day I would practise it again and again as my mother demanded.After learning it for three years,little by little,I begin to show great interest in singing.I sing for nothing.i just like it very much,because it brings a lot of fun and joy to me,After i study for a long time,and feel exhausted,i often turn on the radio and listen to music.i also have been learning a lot of words from it.In short,I sing for fun.There is no limit to what I sing,so long as it can let out my emotion and pass the pleasant voice to others.It is something more satisfactory and exciting to draw echoes from them than to do anything.It is nothing bad to spread joy around,is it?
in a word,music is important to me.it can make me learn more interesting things and maintain a good mood.So I like music very much.As I can tell,music is my second life.
Thank you very much.