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书面表达

1.写作任务:用英语写一篇100~120词的短文.

2.写作提示:内容是关于暑假生活最有意义的一天的.短文要包括下面几项内容:

(1)时间:暑假里的一个星期天,天气炎热.

(2)我和弟弟骑自行车到水库去游泳.我们骑了约半个小时才到那里.

(3)我们玩了大约1小时,突然有人喊:“救命!救命!”我们吃惊地见到一个小男孩被冲到深水中,我们立刻向那个孩子游去.

(4)我们将孩子拉到岸边,送往附近医院,孩子得救了.

(5)我们筋疲力尽,又累又饿,但感到很高兴,这一天过得很有意义.

In my last vacation,a sunday make me unforgetable.My brother and i went to the lake to go swimming by bike.It's took us half an hour to got here.We had fun playing here for about an hour. Suddenly,there was a boy struggling in the water,shouting"help!help".To our surprised,the boy rushed to the deep water by the wave.We swam to the boy quickly and we tried to pull the boy to the shore .And let him to the hospital,fortunately,the boy got help.Tired but happy ,we think that day was meaningful.
解题思路: 如下
解题过程:
1on a sunday it was very hot. 2My brother and i went to the lake by bike. to go swimming 3.It took us half an hour to get here(花某人、、时间做某事) 4To our surprise,(名词) 5the boy was taken to the deep water by the wave 6And rushed him to the hospital(匆匆忙忙把某人送到医院) 7the boy was rescued
最终答案:略